Burnt – Episode 9

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BURNT WITH WORDS

The driver swung into the front of the fenceless Okwurah house and with a hitman’s agility he jumped down to open the door for his boss. Usually, Conrad would wait for the driver to get down and open the door, but today, the car had hardly stopped moving before he shot out of it. His wife was right at his heels and the driver was right behind them. Then a thought occurred to him and he paused and ordered his driver.

“Okon, take the jeep to the mechanic and call me when you get there.”

Okon looked like a premiership fan who had been looking forward to a star match who had now been told he couldn’t watch the match. He knew there was nothing wrong with the car and that oga was just trying to deny him seeing what was inside the house.

“But oga,” he responded “I just carry am go last week for servicing and nothing do am.”

“Will you do as you are told and stop arguing, you imbecile!” Conrad bellowed. He wasn’t sure what was waiting for him inside but if what Jason said was true, then he didn’t want Okon seeing it. These boys got greedy once they felt they had a hold on someone and he didn’t want to give Okon anything that might tempt him to be greedy.

Okon reluctantly turned around and went to the car. Conrad stayed to watch him drive off. As he got to the door of the house, he heard Adaku’s scream. He nearly kicked the door down as he fumbled to open it quickly and made a mess of it in his anxiety.

As soon as he got in, he could smell it. No Ibo young man who had lived through and fought in the civil war could mistake it. It was the smell of death, and it hung heavy in the air of his living room even before he saw the body. Adaku was wailing at the couch and when he got there, he saw the stiffened body of Clara on there. Rigor mortis had already begun to set in with the blood on the couch caked already. She had been dead for some time.

“Have you seen any of the children?” he asked brusquely. Adaku shook her head and Conrad turned and began to call out for both Jason and Brian at the top of his voice. The reality of the seriousness of Jason now dawned on him. In the US, this would have been handled properly and sympathetically by the police and maybe even spun by PR people to boost his career. But here in Nigeria, if it got out that his eight year old had murdered his househelp, his political career was over before it even began. But why the hell did Jason murder the girl. When no one answered his call, he went to Brian’s room. The door was open and he could see Jason’s back now.

“Jason, why aren’t you answering? Didn’t you hear me call your name?” He said angrily.

Jason simply stepped aside to let him in. Brian had heard his father’s voice and he sat up immediately, now alert, with his gun in hand. Adaku entered after her husband. They both got the shock of their lives when their eight year old pointed a gun at them. Jason was at last relieved that he was no longer the one facing the barrel of the gun. It was amazing how a gun changed the balance of power in human relations. Here they were, three adults, held hostage because of a gun by a boy they would otherwise have easily overpowered.

“I had warned about this gun but you would not listen,” Adaku said under her breath to Conrad. He simply grunted his disagreement at her and then faced Brian squarely. With as much authority as he could muster, he bellowed

“What the hell are you doing with that gun? Did I not tell you it is bad to enter our room? And what got into your head that made you point a gun at your brother, and now at your mother and I. Are you mad?”

Brian withered away before the imposing presence of his dad, in spite of being the one holding his gun. He had been hoping he would finally be able to tell his dad how alone he always felt and how Aunty Clara had hurt him repeatedly. But now, he was not so sure anymore, his dad was so angry, and not with Aunty Clara, but with him.

“Daddy, I wanted you to come back home, Aunty Clara was doing things…” Brian managed to mutter before Conrad shut him up angrily “Shut Up! Do you know what you have done? The kind of trouble you have caused for everybody? Why didn’t you use the mobile phone with Clara to call me if you wanted to tell me something? So you think that shooting people and killing them is how to get attention? It makes you feel bigger than this? Jason!”

“Yes sir!” Jason answered. He would normally not add the sir, but he was so shaken right now.

“Get the gun from Brian now! I need to call the commissioner. I have an idea as to how to make this go away but it’s still going to cost me tons of money, but I don’t have a choice. Adaku, I don’t know what you are doing with this children,” Conrad said.

“Please don’t dump it on me! Is it not you that says your wife must be on the campaign trail with you? Do I share myself into two? Or do I wait for you to accuse me of being an unsupportive wife so that you can marry another wife on top of my head as your people have always wanted you to?” Adaku shot back.

Conrad wanted to respond but didn’t have a comeback. Angrily he turned to Jason “didn’t you hear what I said? Nonsense.”

He stormed towards Brian. Brian’s finger pressed the trigger as panic rose in his heart as his dad got closer. But he just couldn’t bring himself to apply enough pressure to fire a shot.

Conrad took the gun out of Brian’s hands and it was only then that Jason relaxed.

“Maybe I should even hand you over to the police to see what they do to killers in Nigeria. But I have to think about how to kill this because it will affect the family.”

“But Aunty Clara was always hurting me, always touching me here and making me touch her there,” he touched his genitals and chest to explain and then continued “and she said it’s because Jason and Stanley do the same to her that she does it to me. She cut me here,” he said indignantly, touching his face.

When he looked up to see if his dad was listening, he realized that he had been talking to himself. Dad was already on the phone, talking to some policeman.

“Yes, there was a robbery in my house overnight.” Conrad was saying. “Unfortunately, it was only the maid and our eight year old boy that were at home. They shot the maid, made away with my wife’s jewelry and even hurt my boy with a knife.”

He listened in briefly and then replied “yes o. I hope it was an ordinary robbery and not a calculated plan by my political opponents. Maybe they thought I was at home and wanted to get me. But God pass them. Don’t worry, I will make sure your logistics are taken care of. Just keep it quiet and no press. Elections will soon be here.”

Brian got off the bed. His dad didn’t even notice he had left. His mum was already in the living room with Jason. they were both on the phone when he got there. No one would still listen to him. Nothing had changed, really. They all still acted like he wasn’t there. He quietly went back to the room.

Adaku was rounding her call off. She had started calling the busybodies amongst her friends to spread the robbery gist as soon as she heard her husband’s line of conversation with the police commissioner. They would spread the word faster than any press could, and it would be more believable. Then she heard the explosive sound. She raced from the living room to Brian’s room where it had come from.

She saw Conrad looking at the shelf where he had kept the gun and then looking to the bed. Brian, or what was left of him lay on the bed. He had blown off his own head.

***************++++++++++++++++

“So you went to tell on Uncle Idris to Aunty Aisha, en? You have been a very bad girl,” Idris said as he lifted Inya off the bed and made her stand in front of him.

“I didn’t mean to Uncle. I just wanted to know and you told me she knew things, so I thought to ask her,” Inya said defensively.

“Then why did you have to sneak behind my back to go and ask her then? For you to have been sneaking around, you meant to cause trouble,” Idris pressed.

“No. I just wanted to know what more was after what you showed me.” Inya insisted.

“Well, why didn’t you ask me then? I would have gladly showed you,” Idris said lasciviously.

“Uncle, I wanted her to just tell me. When you show me, I don’t like it. It leaves me tired and makes me feel dirty. You sneak around to show me, and like you said, if you have to sneak around, then it’s bad, isn’t it.” Inya said.

Idris was angry. “Have you been talking to Oyiza? Has she been putting smarty pants ideas into your head, because you are sounding like her. Come here and learn what you were asking!” he commanded.

“Do I have to? I just want to sleep,” she said.

Idris assumed a threatening stance. “Do you want your mummy to find out what you have been doing with Brian in school?”

Inya sighed deeply, resigning herself to her fate. Idris read her body language and sensed his victory. He began to undress her.

***************+++++++++++

Oyiza pounded away at the keyboard furiously, taking out her frustration with the situation with Uncle Idris on it. Frustration they say is good, and in the twenty minutes she had spent punishing the keyboard, she could hear the song come out more fluidly with each run. But something niggled her mind. Uncle Idris. Inya. This insecticide mess. The way he hung it over her. Idris. Inya. She kept going over it repeatedly, running it through the mill of her young mind, until suddenly it struck her. Idris had seemed interested in knowing where Inya was. He had been interested in making sure no one else was in the house and that Inya was alone. She sprang up from the keyboard and raced towards their room. The door was not shut. She pushed it open and held her breath. Uncle Idris was butt naked with her sister on top of him. Her eyes locked with his for a moment and she froze. Then she grabbed her diary and ran.

Idris knew he was in trouble. He shoved Inya off him and grabbed his shorts, hurrying into it. Quickly he ran after Oyiza. First he checked the piano area but she wasn’t there. He searched everywhere he could think of in the house but didn’t find her.

**************++++++++++++++

Oyiza hid in her parents’, scribbling furiously into her diary. She didn’t think Uncle Idris would look for her here. She would wait until her mum or Aunty Laraba came before going out.

**************++++++++++++++++

Idris was frustrated. He went back to the girls’ room and met Inya there.

“Where is your sister?” he asked angrily.

“I don’t know. I have not left the room since she ran away.” He hissed and began to get dressed. “You are foolish Inya. You are protecting her. Do you know she was the one that sprayed an insecticide on you and caused your last asthma attack? She wanted to kill you, the witch, the jealous little witch. Keep on protecting her there.” Inya shook her head vigorously “you are lying Uncle Idris. I don’t believe you, Oyiza would never do that!” “Dey there!” he said to her pointing derisively. Then he said out aloud, hoping that Oyiza would hear him “Wherever you are, I will find you and get you!

His phone beeped and he realized he hadn’t taken it out of his pocket. He brought it out. It was a message from Aisha. He selected “delete” from the options. He didn’t want to read her begging, the hoe. The phone asked him if he was sure he wanted to delete. He looked at it and decided he would read it before deleting it. This is what the message said;

“Dear ex-boyfriend, I realize I didn’t get to tell you what I came to say before I found out about your filth. I got tested yesterday and discovered I was positive. HIV positive. Go and get tested. And get that little girl tested too. Don’t drink Harpic o.”

Idris fell heavily on the bed. “she must be lying, she must be effing lying. She’s just trying to get to me, trying to screw with my mind. I cannot have AIDS, this Aisha cannot have given me AIDs.”

“What is it, Uncle?” Inya asked.

“Shut up! Your Aunty Aisha has gone to get herself HIV and is trying to screw with my mind that I have it too. But she won’t succeed, that hoe!” he spoke forcefully, trying to convince himself that it couldn’t be true.

But try as he may, the fear gripped his mind. He had been having unprotected sex with Aisha steady and if she was positive, there were many occasions he could have contracted it. Every other thing that had been happening paled in significance. He forgot about Oyiza, about Inya and everything else. He had to go and get tested. He left the room hastily.

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110 thoughts on “Burnt – Episode 9

    • Eeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A koi iskenchi Walahi . This is a serious wake up call on everybody, sexual abuse is becoming the highest crime globally. Feel really bad inside because I can actually relate to what the girls r going through. I sincerely pray for any and everyone going through such,or has gone through such. May God heal us all in the name of Jesus Christ.

    • Tunde Leye nailed this story this time around. I love all the new twists, they were totally unexpected. Though I wish Brian had shot himself on the leg/somewhere else, not totally wasting his life like that. I hope Idris catches HIV, not Inya ooo.

      Don’t be too sure,abedinho, Tunde knows how to weave a story.

  1. OMG!!! Typical Nigerian parent reaction. They never ever listen,until its too late then they start to question God…mtscheeew. Aisha has HIV,how convenient? 🙂 Lovely Ghen Ghen episode,TL

  2. Oooooooooh NO! Y na TL its not fair u wnt to give dis little kids HIV pls let dem not ave plsss… Plus Idris is just a very useless person gosh. I dnt even knw where to begin from sef Nawa for brian ooooh so sad poor boi with selfish n ignorant parents what a pity 😦

  3. Haaaa…….now idris has overdone it. And as for brian’s parents, u just wasted d boy’s life for nutin cos of ur selfish ambitions and social life! So sad, he shld hv shot d father! **smh though**

  4. I feel so sorry for Bryan. Thankful that Idris’ secret is now in the open. It’s only a matter of time till her parents know. Pervert!

  5. OmG…..omG,…..omG!!
    I have goosebumps all around me.
    TL this is too short naaaa…inya can’t be positive pls God pls…..I sort of saw Brain ending up that way tho.

  6. I knew Brian wd blow his brains d minute he noted nothing had changed! Idiot parents, lets see how they coin ds one. ‘return of armed robbers’ ba?
    Pls dear Lord spare ds stupidly innocent child. Let penetration not hv occured. HIV is a huge price to pay for d sins of bad parenting o

  7. Haaaaaaaaaaay haaaaaaaaaaay haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Haaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ewoooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! Choi!!!!!!! Choooooiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Poor poor Brian 😥
    I hope that disgusting animal hasn’t given little Inya a disease.

    Suddenly feels like everything is happening too fast. Are u rushing the story all of a sudden? Don’t rush o take ur time please. Make d maggi done wella.

  8. My stomach is clenching… Geez! Horrible things happening to innocent children, chei! This is painful,

    Great writing Tunde. You’re driving the point home when it shud hit the nail squarely on the head.

    Parents, mommies and daddies, protect your little ones, God help us all.

  9. Its really sad Brian just wasted away cuz or his untrained parents… They never listen!
    Idris should be killed! HIV should do… He better not give those girls… Gosh! He’s supposed to be a trusted guardian… ( -̩̩̩͡˛ -̩̩̩͡ )

  10. Oh No! Poor Brian, see the price innocent children have to pay because of parental neglect. Where then is the saying “home is where the heart is”? God the GREATEST PSYCHOLOGIST, pls HEAL every wound inflicted on these little ones & don’t let the spirit that took Brian get to them before your Healing hands. Amen!

  11. Please dont let any of d girls av HIV now,they av suferd enuf! I’l drink Harpic if dey do oh…meanwhile, Burnt is now making me paranoid with my 8mnth old daughter, can’t leave her alone wit my dad or brother, once I do, I imagine idris wit d girls n I just run back n grab her. n I don’t even let any male touch her except her dad n I also examine her all ova for signs of abuse when she returns from d creche…I kno I’m acting crazed but I can’t help it anymore..I blame Tunde Leye….ignorance used 2 b bliss until now

  12. Jesus,aisha is a wicked girl o,can’t she go tell inya’s parents.she dey wait mk dat stupid boy infect those little children abi.

    • I couldn’t agree more, its surprising to knw dt we still have parents who don’t see reason to be careful when it comes to their kids in the real world!

  13. OMG, this episode gave me goosebumps. Oyiza will have to deal with the horror of seeing Idris on Inya. Brian’s parents will regret for life; how will you put your political career above your family? In all, we should all be very careful when we have our families.

  14. Waooooooo,idris is a bastard,what he has done is unforgiveable,back to u my dear Tunde,this episode is damn short,mind urself ooo,u knw am on leave,I need longer epsiode*winks*

  15. Oh! Lord!!!! Why????? That son of a B***ch ….. Arrrrrrrrrrrrgh. This is all so wrong! He must die for this!!!! God protect our little ones plssssss! Brian Dead! That bast***d actually took it up one notch with Inya while the foolish Mother knowing what she knws abt her siblings didn’t see it fit to be more alert when it came to her daughters goes abt shopping? My God! Justice must be served the rugged way…….. Burn Idris Oh! Lord!!!! Why????? That son of a B***ch ….. Arrrrrrrrrrrrgh. This is all so wrong! He must die for this!!!! God protect our little ones plssssss! Brian Dead! That bast***d actually took it up one notch with Inya while the foolish Mother knowing what she knws abt her siblings didn’t see it fit to be more alert when it came to her daughters goes abt shopping? My God! Justice must be served the rugged way…….. Burn Idris Oh! Lord!!!! Why????? That son of a B***ch ….. Arrrrrrrrrrrrgh. This is all so wrong! He must die for this!!!! God protect our little ones plssssss! Brian Dead! That bast***d actually took it up one notch with Inya while the foolish Mother knowing what she knws abt her siblings didn’t see it fit to be more alert when it came to her daughters goes abt shopping? My God! Justice must be served the rugged way…….. Burn Idris Oh! Lord!!!! Why????? That son of a B***ch ….. Arrrrrrrrrrrrgh. This is all so wrong! He must die for this!!!! God protect our little ones plssssss! Brian Dead! That bast***d actually took it up one notch with Inya while the foolish Mother knowing what she knws abt her siblings didn’t see it fit to be more alert when it came to her daughters goes abt shopping? My God! Justice must be served the rugged way…….. Burn Idris Burn!

  16. Oh! Lord!!!! Why????? That son of a B***ch ….. Arrrrrrrrrrrrgh. This is all so wrong! He must die for this!!!! God protect our little ones plssssss! Brian Dead! Such terrible parentsonly caring abt their quest for power hmmm!. That bast***d actually took it up one notch with Inya while the foolish Mother knowing what she knws abt her siblings didn’t see it fit to be more alert when it came to her daughters, goes abt shopping? My God! Justice must be served the rugged way…….. Burn Idris Oh! Lord!!!! Why????? That son of a B***ch ….. Arrrrrrrrrrrrgh. This is all so wrong! He must die for this!!!! God protect our little ones plssssss! Brian Dead! Such terrible parentsonly caring abt their quest for power hmmm!. That bast***d actually took it up one notch with Inya while the foolish Mother knowing what she knws abt her siblings didn’t see it fit to be more alert when it came to her daughters, goes abt shopping? My God! Justice must be served the rugged way…….. Burn Idris Oh! Lord!!!! Why????? That son of a B***ch ….. Arrrrrrrrrrrrgh. This is all so wrong! He must die for this!!!! God protect our little ones plssssss! Brian Dead! Such terrible parentsonly caring abt their quest for power hmmm!. That bast***d actually took it up one notch with Inya while the foolish Mother knowing what she knws abt her siblings didn’t see it fit to be more alert when it came to her daughters, goes abt shopping? My God! Justice must be served the rugged way…….. Burn Idris Oh! Lord!!!! Why????? That son of a B***ch ….. Arrrrrrrrrrrrgh. This is all so wrong! He must die for this!!!! God protect our little ones plssssss! Brian Dead! Such terrible parentsonly caring abt their quest for power hmmm!. That bast***d actually took it up one notch with Inya while the foolish Mother knowing what she knws abt her siblings didn’t see it fit to be more alert when it came to her daughters, goes abt shopping? My God! Justice must be served the rugged way…….. Burn Idris Burn!

  17. No one talked abT brian being HIV positive b4 he passed on.Jess!!just like that,All this as a result of children having low self esteem,no assertiveness and no refusal skills.I suggest children be educated o HIV/AIDs in schools n churches.The home isn’t a safe ground no more.thanks TL

  18. Brian’s family will have enough ghosts haunting them o…. I mean wot kind of explaination do they give after the cock & bull story they’re spreading. Inya pls tell d story exactly how u saw it, witout leavin any detail. TL, up you go!

  19. I couldn’t agree more, its surprising to knw dt we still have parents who don’t see reason to be careful when it comes to their kids in the real world! It sld be aired TL!!!

  20. Pls dnt let any of d girls av HIV now,they av suferd enuf! I’l drink Harpic if dey do oh…meanwhyl, Burnt is now making me paranoid with my 8mnth old daughter, cant leave her alone wit my dad or brother, once I do, I imagine idris wit d girls n I just run back n grab her. n I dont even let any male touch her except her dad n I also examine her all ova for signs of abuse when she returns from d creche.I kno im acting crazed bt cant help it anymore..I blame Tunde Leye….ignorance used 2 b bliss until now

    • @dapsiza,Tunde Leye is not making u paranoid but only enlightening u to d basic truth! A lot of carelessness on d part of d mothers has made many children victims of such abuses today,u shd be happy u read this story,I can’t count how many of my friends were abused,even whilst knwing abt this my neice was abused recently right under our noses! One can never be too careful ,God bleSs u TL! Kip up d good work

    • Sista,its not paranoia o!! Its the reality of what we are faced with in the world today. My daughter is 3 and thanks to Tunde,I’m more aware and I let her know what kind of touching is right or wrong. Just thank Tunde for making us all more aware of this realities so we do better for our children because the ignorance is what kills o!!! The other day, a police corporal raped a 2 year old baby!! 2 year old!! Hmmmm. There are psycos everywhere…May God help us take care of the gifts He has entrusted to our care, Amen!!

  21. Haba oga leye. Na u b oga oooo
    y will u leave ur readers high n dry like this????
    Walahi, if I reach work late ehhhn….

  22. Hmmmmm!!! I’m really short of words…… So sad Brian had to die that way. As for Uncle Idris, I just hope he hasn’t transmitted the disease to the poor girls. It may be just a story but really these things happen around us all the time. Only a few bold ones can tell the real story. God help us all.

  23. 1st of Brian has watched to many movies,couldn’t he he shoot something else? Kai! Idris and his filth,how can a person be sooo disgusting. Tunde abeg don’t inya HIV she doesn’t deserve it please *crying* why should children pay the price of the ignorance,insolence and wickedness around them *sigh

  24. This story’s soo sad, even more so cuz theses things really happen. I have a niece and a nephew and my sister doesn’t joke with coaching them bou their bodies. I used2think she was being overly protective but I thank God I know better. *sigh*

  25. Hmmmmmmmm Tunde. So many lessons to learn from this o especially for parents! We really NEED to wake up and be better parents to our children than some of our parents were to us. We need to WAKE UP and take responsibility for the children God has given to us because when you really look at it, we are just caregivers to God’s gifts. So we need to ask ourselves how well we are taking care of His gifts! Its not all about money or ambition or providing all they need…..your presence and knowing that you LISTEN to them always makes a difference!!!! Parents, LET’S WAKE UP!!! Tunde,thanks for this wake up call. By the way, I want that picture awoof o….but na Abuja I dey!!! How we go do am??? Hehehehehehe!!!

  26. Brian’s parents tho……wasted that poor boy’s life for political tussle. @tundeleye killed this piece *u’ve got a +1 subscriber*

  27. Hmm… now the fat is really in the fire for Idris. Oloshi! The poor twins. Poorer Brian! Chei! God help me to be a watchful parent over my childrens, let me prioritize my family above my own selfish needs. In Jesus name. Amen. Thanks for sharing Tunde.

  28. Initially I felt the details of the abuse were going too far, but then I remembered the pictures that several pedophiles were circulating on bbm, a man having sex with a baby girl and a female toddler fellating a man. This issue is real. Now when I see a small girl with a man, I always say a prayer for the child. But the mother of these girls is an idiot sha, oponu buruku. You know your brother has an history of sexual misdemeanor, and you leave him with your kids. It is Hadiza that should be flogged and slapped. As for Brian’s parents; ntoin! let’s see how you change the story now…..
    Good job TL….

  29. to be honest, this story is so not funny (not that anyone is laffing sha) but still!!!!! wish our parents can just be more sensitive to us and note when dia seem to be a change with us irrespective of weda a boy child or a gal child. am a victim of sexual abuse (raped at 12yrs by a man in my neigbourhood) but becos my parents were busy aiming for each otherz throats instead of looking out for us esp my dad, i cldnt tell anyone at home about it. i lived in fear and run away from men back then. it was 5yrs later i talked about it to my then english teacher in sch wen he cldnt understand why i had a huge wall built around my life- was living in a world of my own. its really pathetic i must say. everytime i think about it, it sends cold shudders down my spine esp wen i remember the pain. its been 19yrs after and it feels like yesterday………

    • @ Damsel: its a pity you had to go through such a terrible ordeal. I pray the Balm of Gilead Himself will heal you of all hurts & wounds and that He will set you free from your past in Jesus name. Amen

  30. Tunde dis is an eye opener. Am still in shock, y we do dis to ourselves….. Cares of this world have take over our lives. God help us

  31. OMG O MY freaking god! HIV! *cryin* idris is jes a bastard hu will rot in hell! ## brian is Dead! Poor boy! Wit useless families! Neva I cnt av anyfin 2 do wit politics! Neva!

  32. Forget the fact that he was molested as a year. He’s a freaking sick bastard that needs to be kept away from any human at all. He’s gone way too much now. Haba! He knows he’s doing wrong and he still kept on with it not minding what scar he’s leaving on some innocent kids. If anything, he’s suppose to be the one protecting this children against such. I have a feeling the childhood experience has nothing to do with this, he’s just a sick bastard who wld have done same even if he wasn’t molested and treated with love

  33. I’ve been reading posts on this blog since last year and I’ve never commented, love reading all the comments. This is a sad story and I’m freaked out right now, I have nieces and I’m goin to be extra careful from now on.

    • this is so sad… Now nobody will know what the poor Brian was going through 😥
      I can’t wait for the next episode…..

  34. Pathetic!

    Btw, @TL, a proofread is necessary for ur work. I suppose in d heat, anticipation n excitement of writing, some mistakes occur… Great job still. Well done. Wish I cud lay my hands on d book of this Burnt.

  35. Am short of words. No one should be made to go through this. TL pls don’t let d kids get HIV, as 4 Idris onpe… Harpic small, come make I give u conc. HCL. Mtcheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew!!!

  36. Chai! Chineke mee!! Triple wahala for dead bodies and the owner of dead bodies! Kai! Poor Brian! I hope some parents are reading dis….so they’d learn to pay ATTENTION to their kids, to the very slightest detail. If only Brian’s parents had LISTENED…
    And as for the other family, hmm…won fi’na sori orule sun….I want to strangle Idris right now…And that dumb Inya…Lord! She’s just eight for christ sakes! I hope nd pray she doesn’t contract HIV. Molesting/Abuse plus HIV join, thats just too much for an eight year old abeg! And Oyiza…lord just KEEP her….

  37. i just had to read this episode to relieve myself from my dissertation tension
    wao what a wast of Brian………..and poor little girls
    lesson learnt for the future of my unborn children

  38. I’ll Personally Shoot Idris….if TL doesn’t kill him off @d end of this series. Don’t tell me he was having unprotected sex with Aishat..knowing fully well that shez a “Runs” girl. Oponu ayerada ni bobo idris yii mehn!! God pls keep Inya and Oyiza:(

    • Hi TL, my name is Folake, the lawyer who tried reaching u on twitter. I will like do a collabo with you. I want to write the next episode on BURNT.
      It’s playing in my head. I can have it for you by 2mrw nite. I look forward to a speedy reply.
      Sent from my BlackBerry® wireless handheld from Glo Mobile.

  39. Brian died! Brian died! Brian died! He cdnt take it again! All u parents dt don’t listen to ur children….God will judge u oh!, Inya!!!!!!!! Aisha!!!!! Idris!!!!!! HIV!!!!!!! Hmmmmm! Dis episode…Lord! then atleast I could smile wt d “don’t drink harpic o!” burr is nor funny Jor! U js killed Brian! n I fear for oyiza’s life too!

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